Home

Using Students' Stories in Lessons

Main Menu

Table of Contents

Page Menu

Story Writing Tips

Write the Story

Finding a Topic:

What's up? Find out what has happened recently in the life or your student:

  • family, school, or work incidents/anecdotes
  • visitors or trips
  • problems with health, money, car, neighbors, etc.
  • something the student is happy about or proud of (i.e. communicating in English successfully in an unfamiliar setting)
  • news events or controversies in the community
  • everyday routines (what did you do yesterday?)
  • good news/bad news...
  • describe the clothes student/tutor are wearing today

Your student can decide to write about what's new, or choose another topic to write about, such as:

  • describing a person (family member, friend, etc.)
  • recount an event from childhood, or long ago (this can turn into an oral history project, a few sentences at a time each week)
  • life in the native country-food, clothing, homes, daily life, religion, customs, holidays, weather, etc. (this can also turn into an oral history about the native county, one topic at a time)
  • comparing American life and culture to the native country
  • dreams
  • future plans
  • retelling a native folk tale or legend
  • opinions (about current events, cultural values, etc.)
  • likes and dislikes (food, TV shows, animals, places, etc.)
  • letters to a friend
  • taking a favorite photo and describing the event it depicts or the feelings/memories it evokes

The tutor can supply open-ended sentence completion options such as:

  • Someday I hope my children will......
  • When I was young, I thought....
  • I feel happy when...

Sometimes a "hot" topic will emerge unexpectedly from a reading or an ESL lesson. Why not use it to generate a story as an extension of your lesson?

Elicit the details

For ESL students it's important to process the topic orally before writing anything down. The tutor can ask questions to make sure he/she understands the information and to draw out some of the details. This is a good time to practice "mirroring," that is, repeating the information back to the student to see if you understand it correctly. Ex: "So you have two sons in China, and one daughter here in America. Is that right?"

Get it on paper

When a student decides to write about a given topic, the writing process becomes a sort of negotiation between tutor and student. The tutor's role is to help define the content, and to get the ideas into print as faithfully as possible. Some tutors make editorial suggestions to help the student communicate more accurately in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and syntax. Other tutors just use the student's exact words without correction.

There are various ways to get the story on paper, depending on the student's ability level and preference:

  1. The tutor constructs the story based on info. supplied by the student. With very low level students, the tutor may want to make corrections and supply correct vocabulary. For example, if the student says, "Sidewalk no good today I fall down 3 time!" (and she acts out slipping on some ice), the tutor might write: The sidewalk is icy today. I fell down 3 times. The tutor needs to clarify the new word (icy), but it isn't necessary to go over each correction (such as "fell" instead of "fall" and "times" instead of "time") unless the student asks.
  2. With slightly higher level students, the tutor can take down the student's words, but indicate where there are omissions or errors. For example, the student says, "I go store yesterday buy food." If the student has already studied past tense verb forms, but just isn't using them, the tutor could write:
    I (go) store yesterday buy food.
    The student is invited to self-correct the verb tense and try to supply the missing words.
  3. Another variation on this theme is for the tutor to construct the story based on the student's words and information, but leave some of the words for the the student to fill in him/herself.
    For example, the student says, "My daughter sick. She have fever." The tutor writes:
    My is . She has a .
    The student can try to supply the missing words from memory, by sounding them out, or by looking them up in a personal dictionary. Hints:
    • only omit words that the student is already quite familiar with.
    • you can give the student a little more help by supplying the initial consonant in the missing words:
      My is . She has a .
  4. The student may elect to write the story him/herself, with a little coaching & encouragement from the tutor. The tutor can supply corrections if asked to. (This works best as a homework assignment so the student can spend lots of time on it.)

Check/revise/embellish:

Once the words are on the paper, the tutor should check to see that they are accurate. Read the story and ask, "Does it sound OK like this? Do you want to change anything?" and invite the student to add on to it, "Is this finished? Do you want to add anything else?"

Practice reading the story aloud:

Invite the student to read the story back to you from start to finish. A playful tutor might read the story to the student, but pretend to get stuck every few words, so that the student ends up supplying some of the words for the tutor.

Page Menu

Using Student Stories in Lessons

(Note: Most of these ideas can and should be used with reading activities -not just with experience stories)

Pronunciation:

Keep a list of words from a series of stories that the student has had difficulty pronouncing. String these words together into "tongue twisters" and put them on tape for the student to listen to and practice for a "quiz."

Sight words:

The student might want to keep a set of flash cards to go over each session. A few new words from each story can be added to the set each week.

Some students keep a home-made "dictionary" where they record new words they want to remember. The dictionary has a letter of the alphabet on each page, and students may want to put a picture, translation, or transliteration next to each entry.

The student might have a list of category words in the back of a notebook or "dictionary" for groups of words, such as foods, family members, animals, etc. When these words come up in a story, they can be added to the list. Another type of list is of present and past tense forms of verbs, or of contractions encountered in the process of writing the story.

Some tutors assign (or students may choose) a few spelling words from each story for a list the student will study and get "quizzed" on later. These words should already be familiar to the student orally.

Make word search puzzles and spelling completion exercises based on words from a story.

Listening comprehension:

Ask yes/no questions or wh- questions based on the story.

Reading Comprehension:

Make completion, matching, yes/no, or question and answer exercises based on the story.

Sentence construction:

Make sentence strips from sentences in the story. Cut them apart into individual words, mix them up, and have the student rearrange them into sentences. Or scramble the sentences on notebook paper, and have the student write a reconstruction.

Grammar:

If a particular grammar principle is consistently a problem in your stories, or if your student asks a lot of questions about it, find a textbook that explains the particular grammar point, and/or create practice exercises based on it.

Spelling:

The student can pick a few words from the story to learn for a future quiz. Have the student circle the words he/she wishes to learn. Ask the student to spell each word aloud, while looking at it, then, with the word covered up, try to spell it on another piece of paper. The student can copy each word onto a list in a notebook, or on index cards, and study for a quiz every few weeks.

Other ideas:

  • Show your student how to get the story on a word processor, and get a finished print out!
  • Give the tutor coordinator a copy of the story-she can get them printed in various publications for new readers!
  • Tell your student what's new with you by writing it in story form, too.
  • Carry on a conversation in writing instead of speech ("dialogue journals").
  • See if your student will do an outside writing assignment to bring in the next time you meet (it helps to agree on the topic, and content ideas beforehand).
  • Take several stories on a common theme and produce a book.

Page Menu

Sample story and reinforcement exercises:

Sample Story:

Today the roads were very slippery. I almost had an accident in my car. I tried to stop at the red light but my car slipped into the intersection. I was lucky nobody hit me, but now I'm a little scared to drive in the snow.

Yes or No Questions:

  1. The roads were slippery today.
  2. You had an accident.
  3. Your car didn't stop at the intersection.
  4. You tried to stop at the red light.
  5. Somebody hit your car.

Sentence Completion:

  1. Today the roads were .
  2. I almost had an in my car.
  3. I to stop at the red light but my car at the intersection.
  4. I was lucky nobody me.
  5. Now I'm a little to drive in the snow.

Spelling Quiz:

  1. sliry
  2. interectio
  3. lucy
  4. almst
  5. accient
  6. cared
  7. nobdy
  8. trie

Sentence Construction:

roads today were slippery the

.

hit lucky nobody was me I

.

Fill in the Punctuation:

today the roads were very slippery i almost had an accident in my car i tried to stop at the red light but my car slipped into the intersection i was lucky nobody hit me but now im a little scared to drive in the snow

Complete the Sentences

  1. I almost had
    1. at the red light.
    2. nobody hit me.
    3. an accident.
  2. I tried to stop
    1. at the red light.
    2. nobody hit me.
    3. an accident.
  3. I'm a little scared
    1. nobody hit me.
    2. an accident.
    3. to drive in the snow.
  4. I was lucky
    1. at the red light.
    2. nobody hit me.
    3. an accident.

Page Menu

This page last updated on October 6, 2005